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nice animation style, i recommend at least some background music though, it would fill in the blank spaces within the dialogue. your drawings were a little crude, but fit with the style. also you should try FlashKit.com for any sound effects that you would use, they're all pretty good, check them out.

nice work, hope to see more from you soon! good luck.

December 18, 2008

Author's Response:

you're right, background music would certainly be a plus in this one... but what song to choose? it would have to be something perfect, you know? thanks for the review, girl, it's good to hear from you :P

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Score: 10

"thank you."

submission: Dog Of Man

date: November 10, 2008

exceeded my expectations, it's good to see more work from you every time. continuing to look forward to your work, good luck.

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Score: 9

"Beautifully Done."

submission: One Planet

date: September 29, 2008

beautiful animation, clear audio, smooth animation. the only one thing i would suggest would be a stop at the end, unless it was your intention to have it continuously loop. very lovely animation, i enjoyed it very much. good luck with future submissions, i look forward to seeing more.

September 29, 2008

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the excelent feed back. I'll send you a pm explaining why it loops. I'm not sayign it in pubic because i want people to have there own interpretations of the animation and not just stick blindly to what i thought about when i made it.